What does your main character look like? Or if you’re
colour, the kind of hair they have, what clothes they wear, their body
type. And maybe the way you picture them
and the way someone else pictures them will be exactly the same, if they’ve
been described in that kind of detail. But even if their appearance has been
left for a reader to imagine, I’m betting you have a clear idea of what they
always some who say, “But that’s not what he/she looks like!” Think Rue in THE
HUNGER GAMES movie. Edward and Bella in TWILIGHT. The movie actors may look
different to how we imagined them–either from their description in the novels,
or just our own imaginings—and maybe that leads to a moment of doubt about a
character we loved. If I got that wrong,
did I misunderstand the character?
be called into question, so you may never know if your picture of them matches
someone else’s. So, does it matter what characters in novels look like?
Palacio is about Auggie – an ordinary 10-year-old boy who likes to do very ordinary
10-year-old boy things, except he’s terrified to start going to mainstream
school because of a facial abnormality he was born with. Eleanor in ELEANOR
& PARK by Rainbow Rowell is picked on because of the way she looks.
(Rainbow Rowell wrote a wonderful post about whether or not Eleanor is really
fat – you can read that here.
interesting—or at least not in the same way—if their appearance hadn’t made
them stand out. And certain aspects of appearance—like ethnicity, gender,
height, weight, beauty (however this is defined)—will affect how a character
interacts with others, and their experience of the world. But describing a
character’s appearance because it impacts on the story is different from
describing them simply to create a shared image.
description of a character who I’ve already formulated a picture of in my head.
If the description differs from the mental image I have of them, that tells me
I’m filling in blanks the author didn’t expect me to fill in. I then start to
wonder: if I describe my own characters’ appearance in detail, am I setting up
the reader to feel disconnected? Because in that jarring moment when I read the
description that doesn’t gel with my own, I start to re-evaluate my opinion of
the character, and that takes me out of the story.
imagine characters –my own and other people’s—the way I want to see them. It
gives me a role in the story and a creative freedom that I wouldn’t otherwise
have with someone else’s book.
more important—than the description
you put in.
important? Do you prefer to have a detailed description, or to fill in the
Kat Ellis is a young adult writer from North Wales. Her debut novel, BLACKFIN SKY, is forthcoming from Firefly Press (May 2014, UK), and Running Press Kids (Fall 2014, USA). You’ll usually find Kat up to no good on Twitter, playing badminton like a ninja, or watching scary films with her husband and feral cat. She speaks Welsh fluently and French badly.